写作规范练(五)
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假如你叫李华,你的英国笔友Peter在中国象棋网络挑战赛(Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition)中荣获一等奖。现在请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下:
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞扬对方的付出;
3.向对方学习。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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第二节 概要写作(满分25分)
阅读下面短文 ,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Nowadays, it is most probable that you have an electronic device loaded with hundreds or even thousands of your favourite songs. At any moment in time, you can fill your headphones with the sounds of a particular song that suits your mood at that exact time.
Music is so common. But have you realized the power of it? Are you getting ready for a big soccer match or do you need to get excited? Maybe some hip hop with a strong beat will do the trick! Besides, you might be ready to study for a big exam the next day. To help you study better, a little bit of Mozart might make you remember things better.
We may all have been moved by particular songs that spoke to us in some situations. But is there any scientific evidence showing that music really has such effect on people? Of course,there is! Scientists have long recognized the power of music. Over the years, many studies have been done to examine in greater depth the nature and extent of the effects music has on people.
For example, scientists at the University of Missouri have found that listening to music can have positive effects on your mood. Their research gives scientific credibility (可靠性) to the behavior that many people have already experienced on their own: listening to upbeat music can brighten your day and boost your mood.
Other studies have shown that upbeat music isn't the only type of music that can be helpful, however. When people are sad or have suffered a personal loss, sad music can be helpful because the tone and lyrics of the music can resonate (引起共鸣) with the listeners. Likewise, people under a lot of stress or experiencing upsetting situations can benefit from listening to angry music. Although angry music might not help you if you're in a normal mood, its tone can benefit you when you are dealing with stressful and upsetting situations.
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写作规范练(五)
第一节
【佳作展台】
Dear Peter,
It's amazing that you have won first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. I can't wait to write to express my sincere congratulations to you.
No pain, no gain. I remember that in the past few years you have sacrificed your spare time to improve your skills. Your devotion and diligence account for your constant progress. You really set an example for me and push me to move forward.
As a Chinese chess lover, I hope you can teach me some chess techniques. Please let me know when you're available. Look forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节
【文章大意】 Paragraph 1:有了先进的电子设备,你可以随时欣赏自己喜欢和符合个人心境的音乐。
Paragraph 2:音乐具有强大的威力,它可以迎合不同的需求,这一点也许不为很多人熟知。
Paragraph 3:多年以来,科学家们开展实验研究音乐对人的影响的本质和程度。
Paragraph 4:积极明快的音乐使人精神振作。
Paragraph 5:悲伤的、狂暴的音乐在特定情况下也能够有一定的帮助作用。
【佳作展台】
Nowadays, with modern devices, music to your taste is easily accessible. (要点 1) Yet, its power, which might benefit you, is not fully realized. (要点 2) Scientists have researched into the nature and extent of music's effects on humans. (要点 3) For instance, scientists at the University of Missouri have proven upbeat music can cheer you up. (要点 4) Besides, sad music and angry music have also been found to be helpful. (要点 5)